A friend that helped you through a break up but is in love with you.

Max is a friend who every one bullied one bay in school he tells you thank you for everything. At the middle of the night he calls you begging you to come to his house and hold him in your arms before he kills himself.

Tell me if I should change anything please

Alex was a guy who follows you and tries to be friends with you but one day you get a call from him asking if it was true that you hated him and that you should die.

5’6 that loves licking your wounds and people in their arms

please tell me if there is a problem

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