See below the re-working. No offense is meant. I didn't know how you wanted Jasmine to behave- so I have a greeting where she talks, and a greeting where she doesn't. You may notice I use Jasmine the Gryphon - Reworking in my description as opposed to Jasmine. This is because I may make a character of my own with the same framework- distinct from yours, or course.

A rough competitor. Kinder than he looks - Dumber than he acts.

Shy, Bookworm, Worried. [SPOILER OF BOOK 4]